Advice and Critique corner - Page 19

coolcat · 6th April 2015, 20:19

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Originally Posted by sworks

Did you shoot JPEG or RAW Jeff? I would maybe try it a bit brighter?

It's a JPEG Mark, Exif data should be intact, I'll get the data

Edit....Exif Data

coolcat · 6th April 2015, 20:29

Quick edit on phone app with the levels

Original...

Edit...

klarzy · 6th April 2015, 21:00

cant really see a difference jeff...

coolcat · 6th April 2015, 21:03

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Originally Posted by klarzy-dials.com

cant really see a difference jeff...

The bottom picture has a subtle lift to the levels, a little bit brighter but only a shade Pete

Rocket · 6th April 2015, 21:36

Quote:

Originally Posted by coolcat

The bottom picture has a subtle lift to the levels, a little bit brighter but only a shade Pete

To enter into the spirit of things I had a crack at it. I fiddled for 15 mins and came up with this. Slightly different and no better.

coolcat · 6th April 2015, 21:50

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Originally Posted by Rocket

To enter into the spirit of things I had a crack at it. I fiddled for 15 mins and came up with this. Slightly different and no better.

Looks good to me Paul

My edit was on the iphone using a program called Filter Storm which seems to work pretty well and is not to destructive if you exercise restraint

Any other suggestions with the photo Paul, not just editing but compositionally etc?

Rocket · 6th April 2015, 22:00

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Originally Posted by coolcat

Looks good to me Paul

My edit was on the iphone using a program called Filter Storm which seems to work pretty well and is not to destructive if you exercise restraint

Any other suggestions with the photo Paul, not just editing but compositionally etc?

Maybe you could ask them to stop and then use a tripod.

I am not going to try and advise anyone, let alone you on the composition of motorsport pics as I have no clue.

I agree with Mark that a tweek to brightness, tone or contrast may just lift it a little. Not easy on a cloudy day.

Edit: Oh I did add just a hint of vignette which is always an option worth trying. All down to personal taste really,

coolcat · 6th April 2015, 22:04

Last edit from me, added a bit of sharpening and adjusted the shadows and highlights slightly

coolcat · 6th April 2015, 22:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rocket

Maybe you could ask them to stop and then use a tripod.

I am not going to try and advise anyone, let alone you on the composition of motorsport pics as I have no clue.

I agree with Mark that a tweek to brightness, tone or contrast may just lift it a little. Not easy on a cloudy day.

Edit: Oh I did add just a hint of vignette which is always an option worth trying. All down to personal taste really,

Well I did stand on the track at one point.....Guess I could have flagged them down for a static shot

sworks · 24th May 2015, 11:38

The Duke of Portland boat house on Ullswater, it's often been photographed but I'm never there early morning or late evening. The best angle is apparently to the left of where I was standing and about 20 feet forward.......in the water

A 'quick' passing shot when I was in the area with the new 1d body I'm now using

IMG_0033 by Mark, on Flickr

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